Storyboard Time Again!

Ok......So i decided to scrap the storyboard that i had started last term and start over, using a different style. Putting the very simply created and colourless character into a realistic and not so cartoony environment, throughout the story. The story, to go alongside the game, features a random member of 'The Dreds' (the army that the player plays as in game), 'Pinch'. He was left behind on the planet Earth by his forgetful tribe and is left to wonder the planet alone. On his jouney, he discovers an interesting looking object, a boombox. It isn't long before this boombox comes to life, and joins Pinch on his journey. Later on Pinch finds that there are a whole load of evolved robotic organsims, created by mankind, that have also wiped out mankind. A whole army of boombox alikes are in control of Earth, and after spotting Pinch, they decide to try and hunt him down......and so on. Here's the first couple of pages, just to give an idea of the style the entire storyboard will probably be created in.